Tuesday, September 30, 2014

"Mistakes Were Made" Rewrite

The prisoner stood before the court and said, "Mistakes were made," and "I'm sorry for what happened."

"The way he puts it, you'd hardly guess that he had anything to do with that burglary," muttered the woman whose store he broke into.

Rewrite the prisoner's words, to more accurately reflect what really happened.

Expectations:
  • at least 6-10 sentences
  • correct capitalization & punctuation
  • stay on topic
  • include details

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